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“Did you feel that one?”
“Yes, Toni.”
“…What about that one?”
“Yes, Toni, I can feel it.”
“…......And that one?”
You sigh and put down the baby name book, rolling your eyes, “Toni, sweetie, I know you like to feel the babies kicking but you really don’t need to ask me, the one carrying them, whether I can feel it or not.”
He chuckles and sits up properly, having been hunched over you with his hands sprawled across your skin to feel every one of the twins’ kicks, realising what was wrong with his questions, “Ah… lo siento, ________. I’m just excited! It’s twins this time!”
“I know, Toni. Two very active twins,” you tell him, “Who, by the way, are way harder to name. We need two boys and two girls’ names, just in case.”
“…We managed to pick out Luis’ name.”
You shake your head, “No, Toni, you chose Luis’ name. I just went along with it because we had the same problem last time and couldn’t decide on anything.”
Antonio picks you up and puts you on his lap, hugging you to his chest, “It’s okay, ________, we’ll think of something that’s perfect for both of them.”
“Well, start thinking,” you say, handing the book to him and resting your head on his shoulder, “I might have to leave it to you again.” Antonio goes to speak, but you interrupt, “And don’t you dare ask Gilbert or Francis. You know that a certain someone is just going to suggest calling ‘mein awesome nephews or nieces after zhe awesome me! Gilbert und Gilberta!’” you impersonate Gilbert’s voice with a very thick accent, making Toni laugh again.
“Si, I can see him saying that… And what about Francis?”
“‘…Onhonhonhon, you should just call the little cuties after me! Francis and Francesca are tres bien, non?’”
Toni laughs loudly at that one, “Alright, I see your point, chica. …That was a weirdly good impression…”
“Uh, thank you?” you say with a giggle, “But, anyway, I don’t care if it’s Spanish, English… whatever, as long as we choose something. Not German or French, though, because you know they’ll gloat about it every single day for the rest of their lives and I can only just about put up with them now.”
“They’re alright. They’re just excited like us about being uncles. …sort of.”
“I’m still naming Ludwig godfather before his brother gets near them, you know.”
Toni nods, sliding you off of his lap again to stand up, “Well, anyway, just looking through the book, I liked (name you dislike).”
You frown, “…Really? I don’t like that…”
“…We could always ask Lovi…”
“No! And don’t even consider Feli because Lasagne and Tomato are not appropriate,” you tell him.
“Gilbert.
“What?” you ask, turning to look at him.
“I didn’t say anything. Look, I won’t ask them, then. We’ll keep it between us. Since I chose Luis, how about something from (your country)?” he suggests.
“Like what? (Popular name).”
“Yeah, if that’s what you like.”
You shrug and look back at the book.
“Gilbert.”
You look at Toni, who is busy looking through the book, “It doesn’t help if you whisper things, Toni. If you have a suggestion, just say it.”
He seems confused, “Chica, I didn’t say--” His speech comes to an abrupt pause when he looks out of the window as he puts the book down. “…anything…” he finishes, quietly.
“Francis.”
You go to speak, but Toni puts a finger to his lips to silence you. He gets to his feet and turns to face the couch, frowning. You turn to see what he’s looking at and sigh in irritation. In one quick movement, you watch your husband reach behind the couch and pull up his two best friends by their hair, despite their shrieking.
“No! NONONO, STOP!” Francis wails.
“HOW DO YOU GET INTO OUR HOUSE?!” you ask, staring at them.
Gilbert chuckles quietly, looking embarrassed, “We-- ah, OKAY, TONI, PUT US DOWN! And I do NOT SOUND LIKE THAT, FRAU! I am highly offended!”
Toni lets go of their hair and they drop to their knees, rubbing their scalps.
“What’s wrong with my name anyway?” Francis asks.
“Your na-- WE ARE NOT NAMING THEM GILBERT AND FRANCIS!!”
Look, another one! :3 lol this was requested by :iconred-alchemist: so I hope you like it.

Okay, these are meant to be silly and short. I got a message from a friend of mine who said they were amusing but really retarded. They're meant to be. I know Ihaven't got hate in the messages, but I just thought I'd put it out there.

Germany version - marshmallow-maraca.deviantart.…
Norway version - marshmallow-maraca.deviantart.…
Romano version - marshmallow-maraca.deviantart.…
Japan version - marshmallow-maraca.deviantart.…
2P!Italy version - marshmallow-maraca.deviantart.…
Netherlands version - marshmallow-maraca.deviantart.…
Russia version - marshmallow-maraca.deviantart.…
2P!England version - marshmallow-maraca.deviantart.…

Series Discontinued. Please don't request a character

Pic not mine, any mistakes pointed out would be appreciated :)
I own nothing but the story ;)
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:iconnari-nar:
Nari-Nar Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
*Reads first lines* Can you feel it Mr. Krabs?!?!?
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh god... XD
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:iconilldoitforbaltimore:
illdoitforbaltimore Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
"How about something from (your country)" I'm Mexican American... YES LETS NAME OUR CHILD MARGARITA! (Yes that is an actual name in Mexico) 
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YES DO THAT PLEASE
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:iconilldoitforbaltimore:
illdoitforbaltimore Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
Definitely better than Francesca or Gilberta :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconaphy-taffy:
Aphy-Taffy Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014
As soon as I realised the whispers were coming from Gilbert and Francis, I nearly died xD
I have tears in my eyes omg
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahah oh I'm glad you liked it ^^
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:iconmonokuma2018:
monokuma2018 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
They got into the house using his awesomeness :3. A name I found cute was Natalie, Brooke (g), .... that's all I got ;u;
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like Natalie~ ^w^
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:iconanimepanther921:
AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
Ummm..... Girl will be Luciana or Sara! Boy will be.... Leon! Ohh... Or Andres! 
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely~
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:iconanimekitty2014:
AnimeKitty2014 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014
This was funny!
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you liked it ^^
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:iconmlp-lover910:
mlp-lover910 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No France x pregnant reader? ;^;
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's in my request list, I believe
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:iconmlp-lover910:
mlp-lover910 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yay! =3
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:iconjadethekidr9:
JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014   General Artist
GOD DAMMIT YOU MORONS. I'M TRYING TO RELAX! -scoots away like an old lady mumbling that "i'm too fat to be doing this"- 
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD hahah this made me giggle ^^
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:iconjadethekidr9:
JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014   General Artist
im glad i did ;D 
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:iconyellowvixen:
YellowVixen Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist
"this time"...? how many children do i have?!
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I didn't really specify, but 'Luis' is Reader and Toni's son.. ^^
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:iconwoffiwaffles:
WoffiWaffles Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
...My name is French and German...
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, well, sorry about that ^^;; I can't make it go to everyone
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:iconwoffiwaffles:
WoffiWaffles Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know. I just thought it was a bit funny ^^"
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:iconalexialovescupcakes:
alexialovescupcakes Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Ohonhonhonhon~
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD heheh
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:iconalexialovescupcakes:
alexialovescupcakes Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
That laugh tho
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:icondarknightmarewing:
DarkNightmareWing Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
can u plz do a france n prussia plz i want to know how it turn's out n i LOVE ur story u writtenAwww 
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I have a france in my requests so that's gonna happen when all of my work has been handed in to my teacher ^^ I'm nearly done so I'll start taking requests and writing the ones I have very soon! :)
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:icondarknightmarewing:
DarkNightmareWing Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
kk thx X3 here have a cookie! *hands you a cookie*
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD hahah thanks~ :3
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:icondarknightmarewing:
DarkNightmareWing Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
ur welcome~  Erio Touwa Smile Emote 
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kiasun Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
LOL I WAS READING THE STORY OUT LOAD ESPECIALLY THE ACCENTED PARR, MY MOM GAVE ME WIERD LOOKS FEOM MY MOM
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:iconiloveharrypotter1234:
IloveHarryPotter1234 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, could you please do a Russia or Prussia one? Just a thought....^^;
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I have a russia one in my request list~ ^^
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:iconiloveharrypotter1234:
IloveHarryPotter1234 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay!
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haleyboplucy Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
they are trying to be the voices in our heads. But its not working!!!!!!!!!! I would like Alice, Vladimir(idk why i just like the name), Sherlock(girl or boy), Lukas, and Fawn 
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD ahaha yeah they're trying~
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:iconexcentricaluli:
excentricaluli Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
oh god!!!, this is so cool!!!!! :laughing: I just love it!!!! 
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I'm glad you like it ^_^
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:iconexcentricaluli:
excentricaluli Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
thanks!!, I really would like to read Francis or Gilbert's one!! 
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
psst -- I take requests in my notes!
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:iconexcentricaluli:
excentricaluli Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
really? 
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I do. Send me a note if you want a request~
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:iconexcentricaluli:
excentricaluli Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
sure!!, I already did!!! 
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InuAshi86 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD my god I can't stop laughing
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD lol glad you liked it~
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:iconask-alicegf:
Ask-AliceGF Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Leo and Veronica! We will name them after my parents! ♥
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:iconmarshmallow-maraca:
Marshmallow-Maraca Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww very cute ^_^
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:iconask-alicegf:
Ask-AliceGF Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thank you 
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